Re: [Ace] [Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-14

Cigdem Sengul <cigdem.sengul@gmail.com> Wed, 09 March 2022 23:43 UTC

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From: Cigdem Sengul <cigdem.sengul@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 09 Mar 2022 23:43:31 +0000
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Subject: Re: [Ace] [Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-14
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Fixed back in the new commit. Thank you! I wasn't sure how to react to
downref comment.

On Wed, 9 Mar 2022 at 23:39, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> wrote:

> On Wed, Mar 09, 2022 at 11:27:40PM +0000, Francesca Palombini wrote:
> >
> > Just one note: for the downref to informative documents (for those
> documents that were actually included in the text), please revert the
> change – RFC 6234 and RFC 8032 were correctly referenced as normative,
> since they are mandatory to implement. MQTT standards are also correctly
> referenced normatively. Jean was only noting these appear as downrefs, but
> downrefs are not “mistakes”, they just require more attention – see
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 for more information. Downrefs are
> usually Last Called to make sure the community is aware of them, except for
> those that have appeared as downref for many documents and don’t need to be
> Last Called explicitly anymore: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/.
>
> Exactly so.  Thanks for the quick clarification, Francesca!
>
> -Ben
>