[Ace] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-dtls-authorize-16: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 25 March 2021 04:28 UTC

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Subject: [Ace] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-dtls-authorize-16: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ace-dtls-authorize-16: No Objection

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In Section 3.2.2, first paragraph, why is that only a SHOULD?  What's a
situation in which I might do something else?  Same for the one in the second
paragraph of Section 3.4.

In the last paragraph of Section 3.3.1, "additionally" doesn't need to appear
twice.