Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-01.txt

Mohit Sahni <mohit06jan@gmail.com> Wed, 28 April 2021 19:55 UTC

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Date: Wed, 28 Apr 2021 12:55:11 -0700
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Subject: Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-01.txt
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Hi Hendrik
Sure, I will do that as part of my next draft.

Thanks
Mohit

On Thu, Apr 22, 2021 at 11:30 PM Brockhaus, Hendrik <
hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com> wrote:

> Hi Mohit
>
> Thank you for the update and removing specific reference to CMPV2.
> May be you can also remove 'V2' in the document tittle, heading line, and
> file name with the next update as well.
>
> Many Thanks,
> Hendrik
>
> > Von: Ace <ace-bounces@ietf.org> Im Auftrag von Mohit Sahni
> > Gesendet: Freitag, 23. April 2021 07:54
> >
> > Hello Ace WG,
> > I have updated this draft based on the comments that I received from the
> ACE
> > WG. Here is a summary of the changes:
> > - Changed CMPv2 to CMP and added reference to CMPv3 draft.
> > - Updated the Service Discovery section based on the comments
> > - Added more clarifications for coaps or coap over DTLS
> > - Updated the CoAP-to-HTTP proxy section with more clarifications.
> > - Updated the security considerations section based on David and
> Hendrik's
> > comments.
> > - Few other minor changes.
> >
> > I believe I have taken care of all the comments that I got.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Mohit Sahni
> >
> > On Thu, Apr 22, 2021 at 10:37 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
> > >
> > >
> > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> > > This draft is a work item of the Authentication and Authorization for
> > Constrained Environments WG of the IETF.
> > >
> > >         Title           : CoAP Transport for CMPV2
> > >         Authors         : Mohit Sahni
> > >                           Saurabh Tripathi
> > >         Filename        : draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-01.txt
> > >         Pages           : 8
> > >         Date            : 2021-04-22
> > >
> > > Abstract:
> > >    This document specifies the use of Constrained Application Protocol
> > >    (CoAP) as a transport medium for the Certificate Management Protocol
> > >    (CMP).  CMP defines the interaction between various PKI entities for
> > >    the purpose of certificate creation and management.  CoAP is an HTTP
> > >    like client-server protocol used by various constrained devices in
> > >    the IoT space.
> > >
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