Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-14.txt

Thanks Marco!

Yours,
Daniel

On Thu, Dec 23, 2021 at 8:05 AM Marco Tiloca <marco.tiloca@ri.se> wrote:

> Hello Daniel,
>
> I do not have and I am not aware of any IPR on this document.
>
> I have just submitted version -15, with the two requested fixes.
>
>
> * In Section 3.3
>
> OLD:
> the KDC MAY NOT include 'sign_info' parameter
>
> NEW:
> the KDC MAY omit the 'sign_info' parameter
>
>
> * The apparently unused reference "I-D.ietf-cose-rfc8152bis-struct" was
> actually used in Section 1.1. However, it was spread over two lines, hence
> probably missed by the nit checker. It's fixed now.
>
>
> Best,
> /Marco
>
> On 2021-12-23 01:55, Daniel Migault wrote:
>
> Hi,
>
> In order to complete the shepherd I would like the co-author to confirm
> that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance
> with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have already been filed.
>
> Please have also a look at the nits
>
> https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-14.txt
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> There is a MAY NOT that causes an issue as well as unused references.
>
> Yours,
> Daniel
>
> On Mon, Oct 25, 2021 at 12:48 PM Marco Tiloca <marco.tiloca=
> 40ri.se@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>
>> Hello ACE,
>>
>> This new version should have addressed all the WGLC comments from Göran
>> [1] and Cigdem [2], as well as further points from follow-up discussions
>> on the thread throughout the draft revision.
>>
>> Thank you very much for the good comments!
>>
>> Best,
>> /Marco
>>
>> [1]
>> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ace/pr2gBhvqy9j8AfUdQVTZLwamXac/
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>> [2]
>> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ace/gv_uRo2Y45jqOLJghVSbAARWky0/
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>>
>> On 2021-10-25 15:57, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> > This draft is a work item of the Authentication and Authorization for
>> Constrained Environments WG of the IETF.
>> >
>> >          Title           : Key Provisioning for Group Communication
>> using ACE
>> >          Authors         : Francesca Palombini
>> >                            Marco Tiloca
>> >       Filename        : draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-14.txt
>> >       Pages           : 106
>> >       Date            : 2021-10-25
>> >
>> > Abstract:
>> >     This document defines how to use the Authentication and
>> Authorization
>> >     for Constrained Environments (ACE) framework to distribute keying
>> >     material and configuration parameters for secure group
>> communication.
>> >     Candidate group members acting as Clients and authorized to join a
>> >     group can do so by interacting with a Key Distribution Center (KDC)
>> >     acting as Resource Server, from which they obtain the keying
>> material
>> >     to communicate with other group members.  While defining general
>> >     message formats as well as the interface and operations available at
>> >     the KDC, this document supports different approaches and protocols
>> >     for secure group communication.  Therefore, details are delegated to
>> >     separate application profiles of this document, as specialized
>> >     instances that target a particular group communication approach and
>> >     define how communications in the group are protected.  Compliance
>> >     requirements for such application profiles are also specified.
>> >
>> >
>> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> >
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>> >
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>> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> >
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>> Marco Tiloca
>> Ph.D., Senior Researcher
>>
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>> Department: Computer Science
>> Unit: Cybersecurity
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> Daniel Migault
> Ericsson
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> Marco Tiloca
> Ph.D., Senior Researcher
>
> Division: Digital System
> Department: Computer Science
> Unit: Cybersecurity
>
> RISE Research Institutes of Swedenhttps://www.ri.se
>
> Phone: +46 (0)70 60 46 501
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