Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-07.txt

Dear Ace,
As discussed in the last IETF meeting, I've submitted a new version that
hopefully addresses the issues raised in the meeting and Jim's latest
review:
In Section 2.2.3, added the constraint on which packets the Client can
send, and the server can process after CONNECT before CONNACK. In Section
2.2.3, clarified that session state is identified by Client Identifier, and
listed its content.
                In Section 2.2.3, clarified the issue of Client Identifier
collision when the broker supports session continuation.
                              Corrected the buggy scope example in Section
3.1.

Regards,
--Cigdem

On Tue, Aug 25, 2020 at 11:25 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Authentication and Authorization for
> Constrained Environments WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT)-TLS
> profile of Authentication and Authorization for Constrained Environments
> (ACE) Framework
>         Authors         : Cigdem Sengul
>                           Anthony Kirby
>                           Paul Fremantle
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-07.txt
>         Pages           : 31
>         Date            : 2020-08-25
>
> Abstract:
>    This document specifies a profile for the ACE (Authentication and
>    Authorization for Constrained Environments) framework to enable
>    authorization in an Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT)-based
>    publish-subscribe messaging system.  Proof-of-possession keys, bound
>    to OAuth2.0 access tokens, are used to authenticate and authorize
>    MQTT Clients.  The protocol relies on TLS for confidentiality and
>    MQTT server (broker) authentication.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-07
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-07
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-07
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>
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