Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-01.txt

["Brockhaus, Hendrik" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Mohit

Thank you for the update and removing specific reference to CMPV2.
May be you can also remove 'V2' in the document tittle, heading line, and file name with the next update as well.

Many Thanks,
Hendrik

> Von: Ace <[e-mail]> Im Auftrag von Mohit Sahni
> Gesendet: Freitag, 23. April 2021 07:54
> 
> Hello Ace WG,
> I have updated this draft based on the comments that I received from the ACE
> WG. Here is a summary of the changes:
> - Changed CMPv2 to CMP and added reference to CMPv3 draft.
> - Updated the Service Discovery section based on the comments
> - Added more clarifications for coaps or coap over DTLS
> - Updated the CoAP-to-HTTP proxy section with more clarifications.
> - Updated the security considerations section based on David and Hendrik's
> comments.
> - Few other minor changes.
> 
> I believe I have taken care of all the comments that I got.
> 
> Thanks,
> Mohit Sahni
> 
> On Thu, Apr 22, 2021 at 10:37 PM <[e-mail]> wrote:
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Authentication and Authorization for
> Constrained Environments WG of the IETF.
> >
> >         Title           : CoAP Transport for CMPV2
> >         Authors         : Mohit Sahni
> >                           Saurabh Tripathi
> >         Filename        : draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-01.txt
> >         Pages           : 8
> >         Date            : 2021-04-22
> >
> > Abstract:
> >    This document specifies the use of Constrained Application Protocol
> >    (CoAP) as a transport medium for the Certificate Management Protocol
> >    (CMP).  CMP defines the interaction between various PKI entities for
> >    the purpose of certificate creation and management.  CoAP is an HTTP
> >    like client-server protocol used by various constrained devices in
> >    the IoT space.
> >
> >
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