Re: [Ace] [EXTERNAL] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13: (with COMMENT)

Seitz Ludwig <ludwig.seitz@combitech.se> Fri, 26 March 2021 07:17 UTC

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From: Seitz Ludwig <ludwig.seitz@combitech.se>
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Thread-Topic: [EXTERNAL] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Ace] [EXTERNAL] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13: (with COMMENT)
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Hello Zaheduzzaman,

Thank you for your review. The issues you found are now fixed in version -14.

Note that there seems to be an problem with xml2rfc, since the outdated reference to draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-33 should have been taken care of by the tooling.
I have notified the maintainer of xml2rfc and fixed the draft manually.

/Ludwig

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> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-
> oauth-params-13: (with COMMENT)
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> Zaheduzzaman Sarker has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> * Section 1:
>    Nit : s/Respresentation/Representation
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> * Section 3.1:
>   I have similar observation as Martin Duke, and the resolution suggested by
>   author looks fine with me as long as the cases are distinguishable.
> 
> * Section 12:
>    Refers to draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-33, -38 version is available now.
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