Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-01.txt

Mohit Sahni <mohit06jan@gmail.com> Fri, 23 April 2021 05:54 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-01.txt
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Hello Ace WG,
I have updated this draft based on the comments that I received from
the ACE WG. Here is a summary of the changes:
- Changed CMPv2 to CMP and added reference to CMPv3 draft.
- Updated the Service Discovery section based on the comments
- Added more clarifications for coaps or coap over DTLS
- Updated the CoAP-to-HTTP proxy section with more clarifications.
- Updated the security considerations section based on David and
Hendrik's comments.
- Few other minor changes.

I believe I have taken care of all the comments that I got.

Thanks,
Mohit Sahni

On Thu, Apr 22, 2021 at 10:37 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Authentication and Authorization for Constrained Environments WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : CoAP Transport for CMPV2
>         Authors         : Mohit Sahni
>                           Saurabh Tripathi
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-01.txt
>         Pages           : 8
>         Date            : 2021-04-22
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> Abstract:
>    This document specifies the use of Constrained Application Protocol
>    (CoAP) as a transport medium for the Certificate Management Protocol
>    (CMP).  CMP defines the interaction between various PKI entities for
>    the purpose of certificate creation and management.  CoAP is an HTTP
>    like client-server protocol used by various constrained devices in
>    the IoT space.
>
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> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport/
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