Re: [Ace] [EXTERNAL] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13: (with COMMENT)

Seitz Ludwig <ludwig.seitz@combitech.se> Fri, 26 March 2021 14:08 UTC

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From: Seitz Ludwig <ludwig.seitz@combitech.se>
To: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: [EXTERNAL] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Ace] [EXTERNAL] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13: (with COMMENT)
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Hello Zahed,

If it's ok with you I'll fix that in conjunction with the IETF-editor review (they will probably find a few more like this).

/Ludwig

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>
> Sent: den 26 mars 2021 15:04
> To: Seitz Ludwig <ludwig.seitz@combitech.se>se>; The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> Cc: ace-chairs@ietf.org; ace@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [EXTERNAL] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-
> ace-oauth-params-13: (with COMMENT)
> 
> Thanks for the update. My comments are addressed now.
> 
> Found a nit : It is RECOMMENDED that an AS reject a request
>       containing a symmetric key value in the 'req_cnf' field
>       (kty=Symmetric), since the AS is expected to be able to generate
>       better symmetric keys than a constrained client. client (Note: this does
>       not apply to key identifiers referencing a symmetric key).
> 
> s/reject/rejects
> 
> BR
> Zahed
> 
> 
> On 2021-03-26, 08:17, "iesg on behalf of Seitz Ludwig" <iesg-
> bounces@ietf.org on behalf of ludwig.seitz@combitech.se> wrote:
> 
>     Hello Zaheduzzaman,
> 
>     Thank you for your review. The issues you found are now fixed in version -
> 14.
> 
>     Note that there seems to be an problem with xml2rfc, since the outdated
> reference to draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-33 should have been taken care of
> by the tooling.
>     I have notified the maintainer of xml2rfc and fixed the draft manually.
> 
>     /Ludwig
> 
>     > -----Original Message-----
>     > From: Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
>     > Sent: den 24 mars 2021 10:31
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>     > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-
> ace-
>     > oauth-params-13: (with COMMENT)
>     >
>     > Zaheduzzaman Sarker has entered the following ballot position for
>     > draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13: No Objection
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>     > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>     > COMMENT:
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>     >
>     > * Section 1:
>     >    Nit : s/Respresentation/Representation
>     >
>     > * Section 3.1:
>     >   I have similar observation as Martin Duke, and the resolution suggested
> by
>     >   author looks fine with me as long as the cases are distinguishable.
>     >
>     > * Section 12:
>     >    Refers to draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-33, -38 version is available now.
>     >
>     >
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