[Ace] Minor typos in draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-01

Ludwig Seitz <ludwig@sics.se> Thu, 18 August 2016 07:23 UTC

To: Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>, Erik Wahlström <erik@wahlstromstekniska.se>
From: Ludwig Seitz <ludwig@sics.se>
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Subject: [Ace] Minor typos in draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-01
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Hello,

I've noticed some minor things while trying to write code for CWTs:


1.) In section 5.1. it says:

"Create a CWT Claims Set containing the desired claims."

I'm pretty sure you meant a CBOR map of claims, because that is what you 
are showing in your examples.

2.) Also in section 5.1 it says:

"3.  Create a COSE Header containing the desired set of Header
      Parameters.  The CWT Header MUST be a valid according to the
      [I-D.ietf-cose-msg] specification."

Is it a COSE Header or a CWT Header you are referring to?

Also giving an example of what this header could look like would be nice.


3.) In section 5.2. it says:

"5.  If the JOSE Header contains a "content type""

That should be COSE Header or CWT Header.


Regards,

Ludwig





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