Re: [Ace] Minor typos in draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-01

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On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 9:23 AM, Ludwig Seitz <ludwig@sics.se> wrote:

> Hello,
>
> I've noticed some minor things while trying to write code for CWTs:
>
>
> 1.) In section 5.1. it says:
>
> "Create a CWT Claims Set containing the desired claims."
>
> I'm pretty sure you meant a CBOR map of claims, because that is what you
> are showing in your examples.
>

I would say that the CWT Claims Set is a CBOR map of claims. Is that
unclear? I would prefer not to change.

>
> 2.) Also in section 5.1 it says:
>
> "3.  Create a COSE Header containing the desired set of Header
>      Parameters.  The CWT Header MUST be a valid according to the
>      [I-D.ietf-cose-msg] specification."
>
> Is it a COSE Header or a CWT Header you are referring to?
>

One could argue either but I think we get less confusion by changing
according to your suggestion.
The COSE header is the header of the CWT i.e. a CWT header. in JOSE this
relation is closer then here

>
> Also giving an example of what this header could look like would be nice.
>
>
> 3.) In section 5.2. it says:
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> "5.  If the JOSE Header contains a "content type""
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> That should be COSE Header or CWT Header.
>

You are right

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> Regards,
>
> Ludwig
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