Re: [Ace] [EXTERNAL] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)

Seitz Ludwig <ludwig.seitz@combitech.se> Fri, 16 April 2021 06:29 UTC

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From: Seitz Ludwig <ludwig.seitz@combitech.se>
To: Robert Wilton <rwilton@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: [EXTERNAL] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Ace] [EXTERNAL] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)
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Hello Robert,

Thank you for reviewing this draft. Sorry for the long response time.

Version -39 addresses your comment, adding a sentence to bridge the comments as you suggested.
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-39

Regards,

Ludwig 

> -----Original Message-----
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> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-
> authz-38: (with COMMENT)
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> Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> One minor comment:  I found it a slight leap in the introduction in the final
> paragraph ("More detailed, ...") that talks about interoperable specifications
> (implying that specification is not interoperable) and profiles (where it isn't
> clear where these have come from).  So, an extra sentence to bridge the
> concepts might be helpful in the introduction.  As a nit, the paragraph is also
> missing a comma in "interoperate while".
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