IETF Logo Mail Archive

Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-09.txt

Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 18 December 2020 02:30 UTC

Return-Path: <mglt.ietf@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: ace@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: ace@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id A9EFF3A0CFE; Thu, 17 Dec 2020 18:30:09 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.097
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.097 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=gmail.com
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id QdXESFnry-Am; Thu, 17 Dec 2020 18:30:07 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mail-ua1-x933.google.com (mail-ua1-x933.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:4864:20::933]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id CFF4E3A0CE5; Thu, 17 Dec 2020 18:30:06 -0800 (PST)
Received: by mail-ua1-x933.google.com with SMTP id 17so359274uaq.4; Thu, 17 Dec 2020 18:30:06 -0800 (PST)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc; bh=KtEkDvPsJZSd235elbEYJ6eu47PeAsBrGcz6sXLt0Qo=; b=s0cD5hCrv7CFAvHJoksj8h5U0Wd/Xbg774yPfoIgeBXnJeu9T8mtKWej/OFJlN19sz 0+xeVyXUdyXS8GKeT2QW/DhLTR81TsiWEU04BJONxaaGqb32p1Gjbb5N+hHS07jvpyOl zXMKoXCTNX3SFOM2Y+kMcH1XTg5+OVXi4cVjnjCazSK30W+wQXO7by84iUZowZr2Gf0P ssWSwa8NSPMueG5UNkvHnkDpN1MN+xbFk4dY22w9BVFb4zoiE7+we9iAFP/LmqiHKDxl rhVN4FHFBGcvre5+hnFOoLmZ3fBFpM2l8k3tI5OmXpYI0B2uIKHh+c3yt8GfGphDhYw8 5jlg==
X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date :message-id:subject:to:cc; bh=KtEkDvPsJZSd235elbEYJ6eu47PeAsBrGcz6sXLt0Qo=; b=iF0z2yeVwr0dGAHa3oHtJMdJtCaKI3s/G7HeE3M01EgegH4bsOi5zmvqzyw3fSxly5 cvHiE3DapjEi2/sYEyJpniusmh0fFwTNPRYKMKQ7vN5XFhC4Cw9/ldFmFQc0C475q/1s fVjg7Uo8PGm+jp8R++QdcSRJ4PYqeI/OZC4/KTHqOsicQKWpBlL2w3qOMZ1JcjrpT1PQ IKngUqps6d5iH1M6voYIUem9zO7wW1rLE65geCwwrhN2gGeHDmKk+yBTkUx0uRARHILq k5piEj7YAO/ww7JkqPljnJNnimIO5KQjIweDTea9Cr8rBuULmFHHbLP66NCjT4tqkdw/ 25/Q==
X-Gm-Message-State: AOAM5330OXZr59ZClV/CfFBKmg1R538bXXgIUvsxJ4lkAf6Gnq0u3fA+ 5hwta6BYlfRovAdlKLL2pRGiMpXt7loK8C4gS9M=
X-Google-Smtp-Source: ABdhPJyJ4fnec3R6+j9K9WIb0xIPl5Y6ROANP8+DdDAwS6V2YrmzN3e2/KT8WBWVRaa4sMarTj4AZydw0qDrQMbYstE=
X-Received: by 2002:a9f:324a:: with SMTP id y10mr2040210uad.68.1608258605864; Thu, 17 Dec 2020 18:30:05 -0800 (PST)
MIME-Version: 1.0
References: <160824538715.7287.2616747957594971317@ietfa.amsl.com> <CAA7SwCPaEcMh1VLyv696DeXi0zRZDtJdroAyedEvDpypd4Wspg@mail.gmail.com>
In-Reply-To: <CAA7SwCPaEcMh1VLyv696DeXi0zRZDtJdroAyedEvDpypd4Wspg@mail.gmail.com>
From: Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 17 Dec 2020 21:29:54 -0500
Message-ID: <CADZyTk=-um=mZU7ftuF13q2qmrH-jXyY0BReAY+-M1SgMNd6oA@mail.gmail.com>
To: Cigdem Sengul <cigdem.sengul@gmail.com>
Cc: Ace Wg <ace@ietf.org>, i-d-announce@ietf.org
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="000000000000e8dbc705b6b3e202"
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ace/t86m6kBSVycrje7eqleJyHY4Iw0>
Subject: Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-09.txt
X-BeenThere: ace@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29
Precedence: list
List-Id: "Authentication and Authorization for Constrained Environments \(ace\)" <ace.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/ace>, <mailto:ace-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/ace/>
List-Post: <mailto:ace@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:ace-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace>, <mailto:ace-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 18 Dec 2020 02:30:10 -0000

Hi Cigdem,

Thanks for uploading the new version. It however appears to me that two
references have been updated in December.
* RFC8949 has been published and obsoletes RFC 7049. I would suggest to
update the reference.
* draft-ietf-cose-x509-07 has also a version 08 being published - thought
this latest update is more a detail, but since we are here, why not doing
it.

Feel free to run the Nits [1] to check I am not missing anything.

Thanks!

Yours,
Daniel
[1] https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits

Yours,
Daniel

On Thu, Dec 17, 2020 at 5:52 PM Cigdem Sengul <cigdem.sengul@gmail.com>
wrote:

> Hello Ace,
>
> This is the latest version, which I believe would address all the ones
> Daniel listed
> in his e-mail around spacing and references.
>
> @Daniel, apologies for taking so long.
>
>
> Kind regards,
> --Cigdem
>
>
> On Thu, Dec 17, 2020 at 10:49 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Authentication and Authorization for
>> Constrained Environments WG of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT)-TLS
>> profile of Authentication and Authorization for Constrained Environments
>> (ACE) Framework
>>         Authors         : Cigdem Sengul
>>                           Anthony Kirby
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-09.txt
>>         Pages           : 33
>>         Date            : 2020-12-17
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document specifies a profile for the ACE (Authentication and
>>    Authorization for Constrained Environments) framework to enable
>>    authorization in a Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT)-based
>>    publish-subscribe messaging system.  Proof-of-possession keys, bound
>>    to OAuth2.0 access tokens, are used to authenticate and authorize
>>    MQTT Clients.  The protocol relies on TLS for confidentiality and
>>    MQTT server (broker) authentication.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-09
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-09
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-09
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>> submission
>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
>>
>> _______________________________________________
>> Ace mailing list
>> Ace@ietf.org
>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace
>>
> _______________________________________________
> Ace mailing list
> Ace@ietf.org
> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace
>


-- 
Daniel Migault
Ericsson

v2.23.0 | Report a Bug | By Email