[Ace] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 25 March 2021 03:57 UTC

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Subject: [Ace] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13: No Objection

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Seems pretty straightforward to me, though I reserve the right to change that
opinion as I make my way through the other ACE documents.

I realize ACE isn't responsible for CBOR notation, but I have to double-take
every time I see something that looks like JSON yet has stuff like a mix of
quotes and apostrophes as string delimiters of some kind.

Section 3.2: "of from" should be "or from", in the 'cnf" definition block.

Section 4: I think there's a parenthesis missing on the first line of the
example.