Re: [Acme] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-06

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Tue, 06 April 2021 12:50 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Acme] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-06
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Suresh, thank you for your review. I have entered a Discuss ballot for this document based on my own review.

Lars


> On 2021-3-25, at 21:10, Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-??
> Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
> Review Date: 2021-03-23
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-03-22
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> There are a few lines longer than 72 characters and this will fail the ID Nits
> check. I dug a bit deeper and found out some of these lines were in the CDDL in
> Appendix B. Here are the lines if that helps.
> 
> % awk 'length($0)>72 { print length($0) $0}'
> draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-06.txt 73Intended status: Standards Track
>                         D. López 76; RSASSA-PSS with SHA-256, MGF-1 with
> SHA-256, and a salt length of 32 bytes 76; RSASSA-PSS with SHA-384, MGF-1 with
> SHA-384, and a salt length of 48 bytes 76; RSASSA-PSS with SHA-512, MGF-1 with
> SHA-512, and a salt length of 64 bytes
> 
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