[Acme] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-acme-ari-08: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: [Acme] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-acme-ari-08: (with COMMENT)
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draft-ietf-acme-ari-08: No Objection

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Thanks for addressing my previous blocking DISCUSS points, see
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/acme/39amfomGbjKAMTDeAP_Q7mEpg54/

The points below were and are still non-blocking but I sincerely think that the
document readability will be improved if addressed. The text sent by Aaron
about these 2 points would be beneficial to the readers/implementers if
included in a -09. The choice is really up to the author at this point.

## COMMENTS (non-blocking)

### Section 4.1

Also in this section, should the note about prefixing a "00" when the serial
number is a negative number be more than a simple note but normative ? Or if
this is per default in ACME, adding a reference ?

### Section 4.2

Is the first `Conforming clients SHOULD provide this URL to their operator`
correct ? I would assume that this JSON reply is sent by the ACME server
and not by the client.