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Re: [Acme] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-06

Yaron Sheffer <yaronf.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 25 March 2021 14:28 UTC

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Date: Thu, 25 Mar 2021 16:28:44 +0200
From: Yaron Sheffer <yaronf.ietf@gmail.com>
To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>, Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com>
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Thread-Topic: [Acme] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-06
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Hi Russ,

Please see the remaining open issues from your review - we have reopened the GitHub issues:

https://github.com/yaronf/I-D/issues/139
https://github.com/yaronf/I-D/issues/145
https://github.com/yaronf/I-D/issues/146
https://github.com/yaronf/I-D/issues/147
https://github.com/yaronf/I-D/issues/148

Thanks,
	Yaron


On 3/23/21, 15:26, "Russ Housley" <housley@vigilsec.com> wrote:

    Thomas:

    Thanks for the diff.  The revised structure looks good to me.  Much more clear.

    Russ

    > On Mar 23, 2021, at 5:58 AM, Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com> wrote:
    > 
    > Hi Russ,
    > 
    > A quick follow-up to try and close the issues that you could not confirm
    > had been addressed because of the complexity of navigating the markdown
    > diffs.
    > 
    > I have attached the output of rfcdiff, which should give you a more
    > comfortable view over those changes.
    > 
    > On 22/03/2021, 19:30, "Russ Housley" <housley@vigilsec.com> wrote:
    >>   https://github.com/yaronf/I-D/issues/142
    >> 
    >> The restructuring is quire difficult to review in the markdown.  I
    >> cannot be sure this addresses my comment.  That said, the word
    >> "besides" does not appear in the document, so this has probably been
    >> sorted out.
    > 
    > Please see the attached rfcdiff output.
    > 
    >>   https://github.com/yaronf/I-D/issues/144
    >> 
    >> As with issue 142, it is difficult to review in this form, but I think
    >> the concern has been resolved.
    > 
    > Ditto.
    > 
    > Also:
    > 
    >>   https://github.com/yaronf/I-D/issues/150
    >> 
    >> I cannot check this in markdown format.  Please run IDnits.
    > 
    > Done on my local copy and it looks good:
    > 
    > $ idnits draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-latest.txt
    > Inspecting file draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-latest.txt
    > 
    > Comment:
    > 
    >   Found 4 lines with non-ASCII characters.
    > 
    > Found 0 errors, 0 warnings, 1 comment.
    > 
    > cheers, t
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