[Acme] comments on acme-subdomains

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Wed, 02 March 2022 15:07 UTC

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Subject: [Acme] comments on acme-subdomains
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I have posted a -02, only with kdrfc updates, and in order to get XML
uploaded so that I can link to paragraph links:

We have issue https://github.com/upros/acme-subdomains/issues/4 which says:

Section 5, page 14, step 3: Typo. The server replies w/ an identifier of
                         "sub1.example.org" instead of “sub2.example.com”

I think that this refers to:
  https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-acme-subdomains-02.html#section-5-16

it took me awhile to find the spot where the typo exactly is.

Deb, I think that the fix is at:
  https://github.com/upros/acme-subdomains/pull/5/commits/c67527e897e8588ef6582944c2ba242bcc1ff3e0


In the document, we use "example.com" as the CA, and "XXX.example.org" as the
client.  I wonder if it might be clearer if we instead used:
         certificationauthority.example
and:     XXX.enterprise.example

instead?




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