Re: [Acme] AD review: draft-ietf-acme-ip-05

Hey Roman,

Sorry for the lag on this, I’ve been occupied by non-IETF work recently.

I’ve done a pass based on your comments. I’m slightly confused about what you mean by including the clarify suggested in the previous AD review thread with regard to section 6 though. I believe the update in the -05 rev to section 6 clarified this ambiguity around the reverse mapping and SNI, do you think it still needs further work? I’ve pushed a branch with all of the suggested changes here: https://github.com/rolandshoemaker/acme-ip-validation/compare/ad-review-feedback-a

If you no one has any objections to these updates I’ll submit a -06 rev with them.

> On Apr 16, 2019, at 10:42 AM, Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> wrote:
> 
> Hi!
> 
> I'm pickup up where ekr left off on draft-ietf-acme-ip.  I see that -05 addressed some of the feedback from:
> 
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/acme/bGQtdDZ8i75t3dCt3EjPHxsGoG4
> 
> I have a few other items:
> 
> (1) A bit of clean-up is needed in the references:
> ** [FIPS180-4] [RFC4291] [RFC4648]  appear in the references but are not cited in the text
> ** [I-D.ietf-acme-acme] is now RFC8555
> 
> (2) Missing security considerations.  It appears that in pruning the text from -04 to -05, this required section was dropped.  Among other things, please include the clarity suggested here:
> 
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/acme/j8peTskrxupK0AyJyJomS99iOqw
> 
> (3) Section 8.1 -- I recommend clearer language in the IANA considerations 8.1 by fully spelling out the registry names and ensure the registry column names align with this text:
> 
> OLD: Adds a new type to the Identifier list defined in Section 9.7.7 of [I-D.ietf-acme-acme] with the label "ip" and reference I-D.ietf-acme-ip.
> NEW: Adds a new type to the "ACME Identifier Types" registry defined in Section 9.7.7 of [RFC8555] with a Label "ip" and Reference to this draft.
> 
> (4) Section 8.2 - I think the intent of this IANA action is to have "ip" be an Identifier Type for the Labels "http-01" and "tls-alpn-01" in "ACME Validation Methods" registry.  This text isn't clear to me on execution - is text proposing (option #1) to modifying the existing entry in the registry (my read of the text, but two identifier types doesn't seem to be supported in the RFC8555 text), or (option #2) add another registry entry?  Is it:
> 
> (option #1) http-01, dns and ip
> 
> OR
> 
> (option #2) http-01, dns
> http-01, ip   
> 
> Regards,
> Roman
> 
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