[Acme] Editorial fixes in GitHub
Jacob Hoffman-Andrews <jsha@eff.org> Thu, 19 January 2017 19:55 UTC
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Hi all, I did a top-to-bottom review of the spec to look for coherency (since we've changed a number of concepts), mistakes, and general consistency. I filed several pull requests on GitHub: https://github.com/ietf-wg-acme/acme/pull/231 https://github.com/ietf-wg-acme/acme/pull/232 https://github.com/ietf-wg-acme/acme/pull/233 https://github.com/ietf-wg-acme/acme/pull/234 https://github.com/ietf-wg-acme/acme/pull/235
- [Acme] Editorial fixes in GitHub Jacob Hoffman-Andrews
- Re: [Acme] Editorial fixes in GitHub Jacob Hoffman-Andrews
- Re: [Acme] Editorial fixes in GitHub Daniel McCarney
- Re: [Acme] Editorial fixes in GitHub Salz, Rich
- Re: [Acme] Editorial fixes in GitHub Josh Soref
- Re: [Acme] Editorial fixes in GitHub Niklas Keller
- Re: [Acme] Editorial fixes in GitHub Ilari Liusvaara
- Re: [Acme] Editorial fixes in GitHub Jacob Hoffman-Andrews
- Re: [Acme] Editorial fixes in GitHub Roland Bracewell Shoemaker