Re: [Adslmib] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC6767 (4417)

Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> Fri, 17 July 2015 15:00 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Adslmib] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC6767 (4417)
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Yixi, Randy,

Corrected and approved.

Thanks and regards, Benoit
> Hi,
> Yes. you're right.
> How can I correct it again?
>
> B.R.,
> Yixi
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Randy Presuhn [mailto:randy_presuhn@mindspring.com]
>> Sent: Friday, July 17, 2015 19:57
>> To: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>;
>> edward.beili@actelis.com; moti.morgenstern@ecitele.com;
>> bclaise@cisco.com; joelja@bogus.com; menachemdodge1@gmail.com
>> Cc: adslmib@ietf.org; Yixi Lu <yixi_l@rad.com>; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
>> Subject: Re: [Adslmib] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC6767 (4417)
>>
>> Hi -
>>
>> The proposed "corrected" text appears to have a syntax error.
>> There should not be a "," (with or without whitespace) before the final "}".
>>
>> Randy
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
>>> Sent: Jul 17, 2015 3:12 AM
>>> To: edward.beili@actelis.com, moti.morgenstern@ecitele.com,
>>> bclaise@cisco.com, joelja@bogus.com, menachemdodge1@gmail.com
>>> Cc: adslmib@ietf.org, yixi_l@rad.com, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
>>> Subject: [Adslmib] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC6767 (4417)
>>>
>>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6767,
>>> "Ethernet-Based xDSL Multi-Pair Bonding (G.Bond/Ethernet) MIB".
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> You may review the report below and at:
>>> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6767&eid=4417
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> Type: Technical
>>> Reported by: Yixi Lu <yixi_l@rad.com>
>>>
>>> Section: 6
>>>
>>> Original Text
>>> -------------
>>> g9982BasicGroup OBJECT-GROUP
>>>      OBJECTS {
>>>        g9982PortCapTcTypesSupported,
>>>        g9982PortCapBacpSupported,
>>>        g9982PortConfTcAdminType,
>>>        g9982PortStatTcOperType,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxErrors,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxSmallFragments,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxLargeFragments,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxBadFragments,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxLostFragments,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxLostStarts,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxLostEnds,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxOverflows,
>>> |      g9982BceStatTcInCodingErrors,
>>> |      g9982BceStatTcInCrcErrors
>>>      }
>>>      STATUS      current
>>>
>>> Corrected Text
>>> --------------
>>> g9982BasicGroup OBJECT-GROUP
>>>      OBJECTS {
>>>        g9982PortCapTcTypesSupported,
>>>        g9982PortCapBacpSupported,
>>>        g9982PortConfTcAdminType,
>>>        g9982PortStatTcOperType,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxErrors,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxSmallFragments,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxLargeFragments,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxBadFragments,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxLostFragments,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxLostStarts,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxLostEnds,
>>>        g9982PortStatRxOverflows,
>>>      }
>>>      STATUS      current
>>>
>>> Notes
>>> -----
>>> "g9982BceStatTcInCodingErrors,g9982BceStatTcInCrcErrors" should not
>> appear in g9982BasicGroup when they already exist in g9982BceGroup.
>>> Instructions:
>>> -------------
>>> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
>>> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected.
>>> When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG) can log in to
>>> change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> RFC6767 (draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-eth-mib-08)
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> Title               : Ethernet-Based xDSL Multi-Pair Bonding (G.Bond/Ethernet)
>> MIB
>>> Publication Date    : February 2013
>>> Author(s)           : E. Beili, M. Morgenstern
>>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>>> Source              : ADSL MIB
>>> Area                : Operations and Management
>>> Stream              : IETF
>>> Verifying Party     : IESG
>>>
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