Re: [alto] Last Call: <draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12.txt> (YANG Data Models for the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) Protocol) to Proposed Standard

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CC: "alto-chairs@ietf.org" <alto-chairs@ietf.org>, "alto@ietf.org" <alto@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: Last Call: <draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12.txt> (YANG Data Models for the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) Protocol) to Proposed Standard
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Subject: Re: [alto] Last Call: <draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12.txt> (YANG Data Models for the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) Protocol) to Proposed Standard
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Hi Tom, 

(as doc Shepherd)

Please see inline two specific points. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com>
> Envoyé : lundi 25 septembre 2023 13:58
> À : last-call@ietf.org
> Cc : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>; alto-
> chairs@ietf.org; alto@ietf.org; draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang@ietf.org
> Objet : Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12.txt> (YANG Data
> Models for the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) Protocol)
> to Proposed Standard
> 
> 
> 
> Some stray thoughts
> 
> 'source-type' I do not understand.  The module defines it but it is
> not used except as a base in the vendor example. 

[Med] This is actually used in example-vendor-alto-data-source:

      when 'derived-from-or-self(alto:source-type,'
         + '"yang-datastore")';

Section 5.4.1 includes a pointer to that appendix. I trust the authors will update the text for better clarity. 

...

> 
> Appendix A
> examples should use the values reserved for documentation use
> 

[Med] There is no such a thing for the prefix to be used by an example module. We may discuss the need as part of the ongoing rfc8407bis effort.

draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang already adheres to this part from RFC8407:

   Example modules are non-normative and SHOULD be named with the prefix
   "example-".

...but I think you are right that some better names can be used to avoid confusion. At least, the authors may consider updating the modules names/prefixes: s/vendor-/example-.
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