Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09.txt

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From: "Silberschatz, Avi" <abraham.silberschatz@yale.edu>
To: Danny Alex Lachos Perez <dlachosper@gmail.com>, "Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay)" <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com>
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Subject: Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09.txt

Hi Sabine,

I have a quick additional comment:

I believe that an example (sec. 9) of Aggregated Entity Domain is missing.
Perhaps you could re-use (or extend) the IRD example [0] and try to add a couple of sentences to indicate equivalent entity property mappings (see slide 17, 18 in [1]).

Best regards,

Danny Lachos
[0] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09#page-28<https://nam05.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftools.ietf.org%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09%23page-28&data=02%7C01%7Cabraham.silberschatz%40yale.edu%7Cf293677b81b746f9a96c08d741bf5d1b%7Cdd8cbebb21394df8b4114e3e87abeb5c%7C0%7C1%7C637050162478157886&sdata=WFd3vs%2F1mNSTREXwtx%2Fyz8Shf0KRqvsYiMzphaLMqZM%3D&reserved=0>
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On Tue, Sep 24, 2019 at 10:42 AM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay) <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com<mailto:sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com>> wrote:

Hi Danny,



Many thanks for your review. I saw your last comment is in Section 9.7.

Should we consider that until section 9.7 your review is complete or will you have more questions?

We look forward to your other comments,

Best regards,

Sabine





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Subject: Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09..txt



Dear authors,



I started to read the “Unified Properties for the ALTO Protocol” draft (-09).



Please, see my first comments in the attached file (search for '[DANNY]').

Many of them are suggestions about clarity and format issues .



I will continue the review and send additional comments in a short time.


Best regards,



Danny Lachos





On Wed, Sep 4, 2019 at 10:41 AM <internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>> wrote:

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG of the IETF.

        Title           : Unified Properties for the ALTO Protocol
        Authors         : Wendy Roome
                          Sabine Randriamasy
                          Y. Richard Yang
                          Jingxuan Jensen Zhang
                          Kai Gao
        Filename        : draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09.txt
        Pages           : 43
        Date            : 2019-09-04

Abstract:
   This document extends the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization
   (ALTO) Protocol [RFC7285] by generalizing the concept of "endpoint
   properties" to generic types of entities, and by presenting those
   properties as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in
   [RFC7285].



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