Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-09.txt

Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zhang@gmail.com> Wed, 14 June 2023 01:57 UTC

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Date: Wed, 14 Jun 2023 09:57:20 +0800
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Subject: Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-09.txt
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Hi Med,

Great thanks for your continuous help. About the issue of the
normative/informative references, I thought it was addressed. But I will
double-check and discuss with other co-authors very soon and get back to
you.

Thanks,
Jensen


On Tue, Jun 13, 2023 at 10:28 PM <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> wrote:

> Hi
>
> Thank you for taking care of the comments and incorporating the various
> PRs. However, I still think that the following issue should be
> fixed/discussed (
> https://github.com/ietf-wg-alto/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang/issues/75).
>
> I will start preparing the writeup for this I-D. I don't expect to have
> other issues as you already addressed my reviews, but who knows :-)
>
> Cheers,
> Med
>
> > -----Message d'origine-----
> > De : I-D-Announce <i-d-announce-bounces@ietf.org> De la part de
> > internet-drafts@ietf.org
> > Envoyé : mardi 13 juin 2023 15:03
> > À : i-d-announce@ietf.org
> > Cc : alto@ietf.org
> > Objet : I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-09.txt
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> > directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the
> > Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) WG of the IETF.
> >
> >    Title           : YANG Data Models for the Application-Layer
> > Traffic Optimization (ALTO) Protocol
> >    Authors         : Jingxuan Jensen Zhang
> >                      Dhruv Dhody
> >                      Kai Gao
> >                      Roland Schott
> >                      Qiufang Ma
> >    Filename        : draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-09.txt
> >    Pages           : 81
> >    Date            : 2023-06-13
> >
> > Abstract:
> >    This document defines a YANG data model for Operations,
> >    Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) & Management of
> > Application-
> >    Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) Protocol.  The operator of an
> > ALTO
> >    server can use this data model to (1) set up the ALTO server,
> > (2)
> >    configure server discovery, (3) create, update and remove ALTO
> >    information resources, (4) manage the access control of each
> > ALTO
> >    information resource, and (5) collect statistical data of the
> > ALTO
> >    server.  The application provider can also use this data model
> > to
> >    configure ALTO clients to communicate with known ALTO servers.
> >
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