Re: [alto] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15.txt

Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com> Thu, 26 November 2020 20:26 UTC

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Subject: Re: [alto] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15.txt
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Dear Sabine: thanks. I have the draft on my list of review items for next
week. Will get back to you. Thanks.

On Thu, Nov 26, 2020, 1:31 PM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay)
<sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com> wrote:

> Dear Vijay, Jan and Qin
>
> The new version 15 below fully addresses the review comments and now
> includes a "navigation table" listing the new features and the section
> describing them. This table stressed the need to change some section titles
> for more coherency.
> Additionally, upon discussions with Qin,  Wendy and co-authors, the
> document title has now been changed to "ALTO extension: Entity Property
> Maps".
> The document section titles and text have been updated to harmonize with
> the document title.
> Other minor updates have been added to further address the need for
> clarification reflected in the reviews.
>
> The updates done on v14 to produce v15 are listed in the attached text
> file "v15-updates-2611.txt".
>
> We feel the document is now ready for WG chair review and look forward to
> getting review feedback.
>
> Thanks,
> Sabine, Jensen, Richard, Kai
>
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> Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15.txt
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG
> of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : ALTO extension: Entity Property Maps
>         Authors         : Wendy Roome
>                           Sabine Randriamasy
>                           Y. Richard Yang
>                           Jingxuan Jensen Zhang
>                           Kai Gao
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15.txt
>         Pages           : 57
>         Date            : 2020-11-26
>
> Abstract:
>    This document extends the base Application-Layer Traffic Optimization
>    (ALTO) Protocol by generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties"
>    to generic types of entities, and by presenting those properties as
>    maps, similar to the network and cost maps in the base ALTO protocol.
>    The protocol is extended in two major directions.  First, from
>    endpoints restricted to IP addresses to entities covering a wider and
>    extensible set of objects; second, from properties on specific
>    endpoints to entire entity property maps.  These extensions introduce
>    additional features allowing entities and property values to be
>    specific to a given information resource.  This is made possible by a
>    generic and flexible design of entity and property types.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15
>
>
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