Re: [alto] draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse and IDNITS

Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com> Thu, 13 February 2020 21:32 UTC

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Date: Thu, 13 Feb 2020 15:31:42 -0600
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Subject: Re: [alto] draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse and IDNITS
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Dear Richard: Thank you.  It looks good.  Let me continue the draft's
movement ahead.  Thanks for an expeditious turnaround.
Cheers,
- vijay

On Thu, Feb 13, 2020 at 1:03 PM Y. Richard Yang <yry@cs.yale.edu> wrote:

> Dear Vijay,
>
> We have taken a pass of the draft to fix the IDNITS warnings. A new
> version is posted:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse/
>
> Thank you so much!
> Richard
>
>
> On Mon, Feb 10, 2020 at 12:39 PM Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Authors: I am done with the shepherd writeup of this draft, I will post
>> the writeup in a separate email.
>>
>> However, on running IDNITS, I see a number of problems.  Two that need
>> fixing are:
>> 1) Please divide the references into INFORMATIVE and NORMATIVE.
>> 2) From idnits: -- Found something which looks like a code comment -- if
>> you have code
>>      sections in the document, please surround them with '<CODE BEGINS>'
>> and
>>      '<CODE ENDS>' lines.
>>
>> and there are a few other warnings.
>>
>> Can you please fix IDNITS warnings and errors and generate a new
>> version?  As soon as you do so, I will press the button to send to IESG.
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> - vijay
>>
>
>
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