Re: [alto] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04.txt

Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zhang@gmail.com> Mon, 09 July 2018 07:23 UTC

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From: Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zhang@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 9 Jul 2018 03:23:30 -0400
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Subject: Re: [alto] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04.txt
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Hi Danny,

Thanks for your review. I quickly go over your comments. Many of your
comments are about the format issue. Authors will fix them soon.

Thanks,
Jensen

On Mon, Jul 9, 2018 at 1:24 AM Danny Alex Lachos Perez <dlachosper@gmail.com>;
wrote:

> Hello Sabine and WG
>
> I reviewed Introduction, S1, S2, S3, and S4 of the Unified Property
> draft. My comments are in the attached file (marked with [DANNY]).
>
> Ss
>
> Danny Lachos
>
> On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 3:11 PM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia -
> FR/Paris-Saclay) <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com>; wrote:
>
>> Hello,
>>
>> The main updates in this new version relate to the consistency procedure
>> between ALTO Address Type Registry and
>>  ALTO Entity Domain Registry as discussed during the ALTO WG session in
>> London. This is addressed in section 9.  IANA Considerations, where 9.2
>> specifies the ALTO Entity Domain Registry and 9.2.1. proposes an algorithm
>> to ensure consistency between both registries.
>>
>> Other updates include:
>> - in section 1. Introduction: a paragraph introducing ALTO Entity domains,
>> - In section 6.3, some rewording to clarify between "pid" and "PID" to
>> avoid headaches,
>> - section 7.3 example IRD: name update for the Endpoint property resource
>> - section 7.4: example transaction
>> - Section 10 References: updates and reformatting
>> - usage of expression "ALTO Entity Domain" throughout the document
>>
>> Your feeback will be highly appreciated
>>
>> Thanks
>> Sabine, Jensen, Dawn
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
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>> Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04.txt
>>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization
>> WG of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : Unified Properties for the ALTO Protocol
>>         Authors         : Wendy Roome
>>                           Shiwei Dawn Chen
>>                           Sabine Randriamasy
>>                           Y. Richard Yang
>>                           Jingxuan Jensen Zhang
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04.txt
>>         Pages           : 30
>>         Date            : 2018-06-29
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document extends the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization
>>    (ALTO) Protocol [RFC7285] by generalizing the concept of "endpoint
>>    properties" to domains of other entities, and by presenting those
>>    properties as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in ALTO.
>>
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
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