Re: [alto] WGLC for draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse-11

Vijay,

The ideas that I posted were discussed with Sabine, Jensen, and Danny, who
are not co-authors of the document.

I assume that they are busy today, as 8 pm ET today is IETF draft deadline.
Maybe they can help with our review tomorrow (July 3) or the day after
tomorrow (July 4), before the close :-)

Thanks!
Richard

On Mon, Jul 2, 2018 at 9:34 AM Vijay K. Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@nokia.com>
wrote:

> Folks: Following up on Richard's email, we need a dedicated WGLC review
> for SSE from the WG.  Jan and I will like to invite at least one person
> who is not an author to volunteer to review the draft as part of WGLC.
>
> Thus far, besides Richard's email, there has not been any review or
> comments on the draft since it was released for WGLC.  We will need to
> be more proactive as a WG to move pending work ahead.
>
> Please send me and Jan a message on whether you are able to perform a
> review of the draft in short order so we can move it ahead expeditiously.
>
> Thank you,
>
> On 07/01/2018 10:32 PM, Y. Richard Yang wrote:
> > Dear WG,
> >
> > Thanks a lot for those who already sent comments to the authors! As an
> > important service, this document can benefit from in-depth reviews, as
> > Vijay pointed out.
> >
> > The main substantive comment so far is on clarifying the coupling
> > between the Update Stream Service (USS), which will be used by the
> > network to send SSE Update Messages to a client, and the Update Stream
> > Control Service (USCS), which will be used by the client to control the
> > server, by sending add/remove of resources messages. In the current
> > design, SSE update messages can provide the final outcome of a control
> > request. The comment was whether this is a generic design.
> >
> > After extensive discussions among the authors, we propose to make the
> > following revisions---these revisions will be simple and clean, and if
> > approved by the WG, they can be updated right away:
> >
> > M1. The document clarifies that USS uses a *modular* design, in that the
> > Update Stream Service (USS) is a modular service. Hence, it can be
> > controlled by not only USCS but also other potential control channels,
> > such as a private control protocol. Hence, the messaging of USS, in
> > particular, its Control Update Messages, should be (slightly) revised to
> > reflect this spirit.
> >
> > M2. The document clarifies that USS uses a self-contained design, to
> > take advantage that current design can be simply, elegantly extended to
> > also report error updates.
> >
> > The authors request that the WG approve these edits so that the authors
> > can proceed to submit a revision shortly, in just a couple days.
> >
> > Of course, the authors will also wait for other comments, until the July
> > 4th closing, to make a single, coherent edit.
> >
> > Thank you so much!
> > Richard
> >
> > On Wed, Jun 20, 2018 at 11:21 AM Vijay K. Gurbani
> > <vijay.gurbani@nokia.com <mailto:vijay.gurbani@nokia.com>> wrote:
> >
> >     All: This email announces the WGLC for SSE [1]; the WGLC runs from
> Wed,
> >     Jun 20, 2018 to Wed, Jul 4, 2018.
> >
> >     We will like the community members to perform an in-depth review of
> the
> >     draft and post their comments, concerns or approval to the mailing
> list
> >     during this period, even if it is one liner expressing support for
> >     moving the draft ahead.
> >
> >     [1] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse-11
> >
> >     Thank you,
> >
> >     - vijay
> >     --
> >     Vijay K. Gurbani / vijay.gurbani@nokia.com
> >     <mailto:vijay.gurbani@nokia.com>
> >     Network Data Science, Nokia Networks
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>
> - vijay
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> Vijay K. Gurbani / vijay.gurbani@nokia.com
> Network Data Science, Nokia Networks
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