Re: [alto] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04.txt

Danny Alex Lachos Perez <dlachosper@gmail.com> Mon, 09 July 2018 19:06 UTC

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From: Danny Alex Lachos Perez <dlachosper@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 9 Jul 2018 16:05:46 -0300
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Subject: Re: [alto] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04.txt
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Hi Jensen and WG

I finished my review on Sec 5-9.

My comments are in the attached file marked with [DANNY].

Ss

Danny Lachos

On Mon, Jul 9, 2018 at 4:23 AM Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zhang@gmail.com>;
wrote:

> Hi Danny,
>
> Thanks for your review. I quickly go over your comments. Many of your
> comments are about the format issue. Authors will fix them soon.
>
> Thanks,
> Jensen
>
> On Mon, Jul 9, 2018 at 1:24 AM Danny Alex Lachos Perez <
> dlachosper@gmail.com>; wrote:
>
>> Hello Sabine and WG
>>
>> I reviewed Introduction, S1, S2, S3, and S4 of the Unified Property
>> draft. My comments are in the attached file (marked with [DANNY]).
>>
>> Ss
>>
>> Danny Lachos
>>
>> On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 3:11 PM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia -
>> FR/Paris-Saclay) <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com>; wrote:
>>
>>> Hello,
>>>
>>> The main updates in this new version relate to the consistency procedure
>>> between ALTO Address Type Registry and
>>>  ALTO Entity Domain Registry as discussed during the ALTO WG session in
>>> London. This is addressed in section 9.  IANA Considerations, where 9.2
>>> specifies the ALTO Entity Domain Registry and 9.2.1. proposes an algorithm
>>> to ensure consistency between both registries.
>>>
>>> Other updates include:
>>> - in section 1. Introduction: a paragraph introducing ALTO Entity
>>> domains,
>>> - In section 6.3, some rewording to clarify between "pid" and "PID" to
>>> avoid headaches,
>>> - section 7.3 example IRD: name update for the Endpoint property resource
>>> - section 7.4: example transaction
>>> - Section 10 References: updates and reformatting
>>> - usage of expression "ALTO Entity Domain" throughout the document
>>>
>>> Your feeback will be highly appreciated
>>>
>>> Thanks
>>> Sabine, Jensen, Dawn
>>>
>>> -----Original Message-----
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>>> Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04.txt
>>>
>>>
>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>> directories.
>>> This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization
>>> WG of the IETF.
>>>
>>>         Title           : Unified Properties for the ALTO Protocol
>>>         Authors         : Wendy Roome
>>>                           Shiwei Dawn Chen
>>>                           Sabine Randriamasy
>>>                           Y. Richard Yang
>>>                           Jingxuan Jensen Zhang
>>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04.txt
>>>         Pages           : 30
>>>         Date            : 2018-06-29
>>>
>>> Abstract:
>>>    This document extends the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization
>>>    (ALTO) Protocol [RFC7285] by generalizing the concept of "endpoint
>>>    properties" to domains of other entities, and by presenting those
>>>    properties as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in ALTO.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/
>>>
>>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04
>>>
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04
>>>
>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04
>>>
>>>
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