Re: [alto] WGLC for draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse-11

["Vijay K. Gurbani" <[e-mail]>]

Folks: Following up on Richard's email, we need a dedicated WGLC review
for SSE from the WG.  Jan and I will like to invite at least one person
who is not an author to volunteer to review the draft as part of WGLC.

Thus far, besides Richard's email, there has not been any review or
comments on the draft since it was released for WGLC.  We will need to
be more proactive as a WG to move pending work ahead.

Please send me and Jan a message on whether you are able to perform a
review of the draft in short order so we can move it ahead expeditiously.

Thank you,

On 07/01/2018 10:32 PM, Y. Richard Yang wrote:
> Dear WG,
> 
> Thanks a lot for those who already sent comments to the authors! As an
> important service, this document can benefit from in-depth reviews, as
> Vijay pointed out.
> 
> The main substantive comment so far is on clarifying the coupling
> between the Update Stream Service (USS), which will be used by the
> network to send SSE Update Messages to a client, and the Update Stream
> Control Service (USCS), which will be used by the client to control the
> server, by sending add/remove of resources messages. In the current
> design, SSE update messages can provide the final outcome of a control
> request. The comment was whether this is a generic design.
> 
> After extensive discussions among the authors, we propose to make the
> following revisions---these revisions will be simple and clean, and if
> approved by the WG, they can be updated right away:
> 
> M1. The document clarifies that USS uses a *modular* design, in that the
> Update Stream Service (USS) is a modular service. Hence, it can be
> controlled by not only USCS but also other potential control channels,
> such as a private control protocol. Hence, the messaging of USS, in
> particular, its Control Update Messages, should be (slightly) revised to
> reflect this spirit.
> 
> M2. The document clarifies that USS uses a self-contained design, to
> take advantage that current design can be simply, elegantly extended to
> also report error updates. 
> 
> The authors request that the WG approve these edits so that the authors
> can proceed to submit a revision shortly, in just a couple days.
> 
> Of course, the authors will also wait for other comments, until the July
> 4th closing, to make a single, coherent edit.
> 
> Thank you so much!
> Richard
> 
> On Wed, Jun 20, 2018 at 11:21 AM Vijay K. Gurbani
> <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
> 
>     All: This email announces the WGLC for SSE [1]; the WGLC runs from Wed,
>     Jun 20, 2018 to Wed, Jul 4, 2018.
> 
>     We will like the community members to perform an in-depth review of the
>     draft and post their comments, concerns or approval to the mailing list
>     during this period, even if it is one liner expressing support for
>     moving the draft ahead.
> 
>     [1] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse-11
> 
>     Thank you,
> 
>     - vijay
>     --
>     Vijay K. Gurbani / [e-mail]
>     <mailto:[e-mail]>
>     Network Data Science, Nokia Networks
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- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani / [e-mail]
Network Data Science, Nokia Networks
Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq