Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-14.txt

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From: "Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay)" <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com>
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Subject: Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-14.txt
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Dear all,

Version 13 - draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-13.txt posted on Nov 2nd addresses the review comments of Danny and most comments of Luis. This version 14 addresses pending comments of the review provided by Luis. The only unresolved comment by Luis is providing a table listing the protocol extensions and pointing to the relevant sections in the text. Given that the extensions are defined progressively, we need to figure out where to place the table in the document (beginning or end). Any suggestion is welcome. 

I will send separate e-mails to Danny and Luis, to describe how their review comments were addressed. Great thanks again to both for the thorough review. 

Best regards,
Sabine

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>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG of the
>IETF.
>
>        Title           : Unified properties for the ALTO protocol
>        Authors         : Wendy Roome
>                          Sabine Randriamasy
>                          Y. Richard Yang
>                          Jingxuan Jensen Zhang
>                          Kai Gao
>	Filename        : draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-14.txt
>	Pages           : 53
>	Date            : 2020-11-17
>
>Abstract:
>   This document extends the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization
>   (ALTO) Protocol [RFC7285] by generalizing the concept of "endpoint
>   properties" to generic types of entities, and by presenting those
>   properties as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in
>   [RFC7285].
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