[alto] Review for draft-ietf-alto-performance-metrics-12
Danny Alex Lachos Perez <dlachosper@gmail.com> Mon, 12 October 2020 13:32 UTC
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Subject: [alto] Review for draft-ietf-alto-performance-metrics-12
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Dear ALTO WG I have done a review of the Performance Metrics draft (-12). No major problems regarding the technical part, Other comments related to consistency and clarity are in the attached file (marked with [DANNY]) Best regards, Danny Lachos
- [alto] Review for draft-ietf-alto-performance-met… Danny Alex Lachos Perez