Re: [alto] Some comments about draft-lcsr-alto-service-functions-01

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Subject: Re: [alto] Some comments about draft-lcsr-alto-service-functions-01
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Thanks so much Med for your detailed review. We will go through your comments in the next days.

Thanks again

Luis

De: alto <alto-bounces@ietf.org> En nombre de mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
Enviado el: martes, 19 de julio de 2022 15:14
Para: draft-lcsr-alto-service-functions@ietf.org
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Asunto: [alto] Some comments about draft-lcsr-alto-service-functions-01

Hi Luis, Sabine, and Xufeng,

Thank you for editing this draft.

FWIW, you may find some comments at:


  *   pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-lcsr-alto-service-functions-01-rev%20Med.pdf
  *   doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-lcsr-alto-service-functions-01-rev%20Med.doc

Cheers,
Med

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