[alto] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse-20: (with COMMENT)

Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 11 March 2020 16:20 UTC

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Subject: [alto] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse-20: (with COMMENT)
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Suresh Krishnan has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse-20: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Section 3.1.1.:
  I feel strongly that this document should not restate the pseudo-code for the
  JSON merge patch algorithm and should instead use a reference to Section 2 of
  RFC7396 instead. This will avoid inconsistencies (e.g. note that the pseudo
  code in this draft is *already different* from that in RFC7396 even though
  the difference is only the braces) and be amenable to updates to RFC7396.

References:

Is there a reason this document is using the obsoleted JSON reference to
RFC7159? Suggest updating the reference to RFC8259.