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Re: [alto] WGLC for draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-12

Danny Alex Lachos Perez <dlachosper@gmail.com> Fri, 07 August 2020 18:40 UTC

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Subject: Re: [alto] WGLC for draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-12
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Dear UP authors

I have performed the review of this draft (-12).
See my comments in the attached file (search for '[DANNY]')
Most of them are about clarity, consistency, and format issues

Best regards,

Danny Lachos


> On Fri, Jul 17, 2020 at 2:01 PM Jan Seedorf <ietf@j-f-s.de> wrote:
> Dear all,
> 
> after a discussion with Vijay on how to move forward with the pending 
> documents, we decided to start a WGLC for the unified properties 
> document now. Thus, this email starts a WGLC for 
> draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-12. The WGLC will run from today, Fri, 
> July 17, 2020, to Fri, August 7, 2020.
> 
> We would like to have two individual reviews of this document as part of 
> the WGLC. Please send us an email if you are willing review the draft as 
> part of WGLC.
> 
>   - Vijay and Jan
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