Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17.txt

[Vijay Gurbani <[e-mail]>]

Dear Sabine: Excellent. I will start to wrap up the post-chair review
process next week on this and path-vector so they can be sent to IESG.

Have a nice weekend.

On Fri, Apr 16, 2021, 2:05 PM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay)
<[e-mail]> wrote:

> Dear Vijay,
>
> A new version 17 of the "ALTO Extension: Entity Property Maps" has been
> uploaded and hopefully addresses the pending review comments.
> It can be found at the link below, by clicking on the number "16" on the
> ALTO status pages.
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17
> Below is a digest of the updates and we look forward to having your
> feedback.
> A detailed "diff" can be sent if you wish.
>
> Best regards,
> Sabine & co-authors
> =========================
> updates in draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17
> =========================
> Previous V16 was submitted to address Vijay's review of v15
> This V17 addresses remaining issues on V15 review
>
> Main update is the addition of a substantial Section 11. Security
> Considerations.
> The other updates are as follows:
>
> - Defined terminology nomenclature used in 4.4.  Entity Hierarchy and
> Property Inheritance
> --- related (small) edits in subsections
>
> - In Section 4.7 Defining Information Resource for Resource-Specific
> Property Values
> text was clarified and moved back from 4.6.1 to 4.7. Section 4.7.1 (of
> V15) with examples was merged with 4.7
>
> - Clarified text on defining information resources in sections 4.6 and
> 4.7, as review reflects it was unclear
> --- added example in 4.6.2 of entity domain types that do  not have a
> defining resource
> --- Clarified text in related IANA sections 12.2.2 and 12.3
>
> - Added normative "MUST" wherever needed
> --- section 4.3.  Resource-Specific Entity Property Value
> --- 4.6.1.  Defining Information Resource and its Media Type
> --- sections 12.2.2 and 12.3 on item "Media type of defining information
> resource"
> - Replaced lower case "must" with other words where convenient
>
> - Rewording
> ---  Clarified sentence distinguishes domain name and domain type in 3.2.1
> --- Added introduction sentence in Section 4 Advanced Features...
> - Typos and nits in sections  5.1.2, 8.6
>
> - Added normative and informative references
>
> >-----Original Message-----
> >From: alto <[e-mail]> On Behalf Of [e-mail]
> >Sent: Friday, April 16, 2021 8:54 PM
> >To: [e-mail]
> >Cc: [e-mail]
> >Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17.txt
> >
> >
> >A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> >This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization
> WG of
> >the IETF.
> >
> >        Title           : ALTO Extension: Entity Property Maps
> >        Authors         : Wendy Roome
> >                          Sabine Randriamasy
> >                          Y. Richard Yang
> >                          Jingxuan Jensen Zhang
> >                          Kai Gao
> >       Filename        : draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17.txt
> >       Pages           : 59
> >       Date            : 2021-04-16
> >
> >Abstract:
> >   This document extends the base Application-Layer Traffic Optimization
> >   (ALTO) Protocol by generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties"
> >   as applied to endpoints as defined by IP addresses to endpoints
> >   defined by a wider set of objects.  Further, these properties are
> >   presented as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in the base
> >   ALTO protocol.  The protocol is extended in two major directions.
> >   First, from endpoints restricted to IP addresses to entities covering
> >   a wider and extensible set of objects; second, from properties on
> >   specific endpoints to entire entity property maps.  These extensions
> >   introduce additional features allowing entities and property values
> >   to be specific to a given information resource.  This is made
> >   possible by a generic and flexible design of entity and property
> >   types.
> >
> >
> >The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> >https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/
> >
> >There are also htmlized versions available at:
> >https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17
> >
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17
> >
> >A diff from the previous version is available at:
> >https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17
> >
> >
> >Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
> >until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> >
> >Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> >ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> >
> >
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