[alto] Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12

Scott Rose via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 26 September 2023 14:53 UTC

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Reviewer: Scott Rose
Review result: Ready with Nits

The draft describes a yang model for provisioning NAPTR RRs (and queries) for
ALTO servers in the DNS reverse tree. This draft does not alter the DNS
protocol or defined use of NAPTR RRs for this purpose. That is defined in other
RFCs.

There is one misspelled word in section 5.3.1.3 (last paragraph): "sugested"
should be "suggested". There may be other editorial nits but they are likely
minor.