Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-14.txt

Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com> Tue, 17 November 2020 22:58 UTC

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Subject: Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-14.txt
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Please put the table in the end.  You can have a forward reference to the
table at the beginning of the I-D to let people know.

I will like to perform a chair/shepherd review on a version that close to
being a final one.

Thanks.

On Tue, Nov 17, 2020 at 1:15 PM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia -
FR/Paris-Saclay) <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com> wrote:

> Dear all,
>
> Version 13 - draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-13.txt posted on Nov 2nd
> addresses the review comments of Danny and most comments of Luis. This
> version 14 addresses pending comments of the review provided by Luis. The
> only unresolved comment by Luis is providing a table listing the protocol
> extensions and pointing to the relevant sections in the text. Given that
> the extensions are defined progressively, we need to figure out where to
> place the table in the document (beginning or end). Any suggestion is
> welcome.
>
> I will send separate e-mails to Danny and Luis, to describe how their
> review comments were addressed. Great thanks again to both for the thorough
> review.
>