[alto] draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang : Call for volunteers to review 2nd WGLC for ALTO docs

Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Sun, 21 May 2023 22:40 UTC

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From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
To: 'Jordi Ros Giralt' <jros@qti.qualcomm.com>, alto@ietf.org
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Subject: [alto] draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang : Call for volunteers to review 2nd WGLC for ALTO docs
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Hi,

 

I looked at revision -07

 

This is a really big document and would probably benefit from a more
detailed review than I was able to give it. But it looks fine and ready to
progress to me.

 

A couple of nits.

 

Section 4.3 might usefully describe that this is an additional requirement.

 

You might reference draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis instead of RFC6991. You'll
be behind it in the queue, so you can safely use it as a normative
reference. That'll be a bit more future-proof.

 

Cheers,

Adrian

 

 

 

 

From: alto <alto-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Jordi Ros Giralt
Sent: 17 May 2023 06:41
To: alto@ietf.org
Subject: [alto] Call for volunteers to review 2nd WGLC for ALTO docs

 

Hi ALTO WG:

 

As you know, we are in the process of issuing the 2nd WGLC for two of the
ALTO drafts (New Transport and OAM). Thank you to all of you who have been
working hard to help get these documents completed, including all the
detailed feedback provided by reviewers during the first WGLC.

 

There is now a need (as mentioned by the chairs) to have as many eyes &
volunteers review the docs to make sure they are in the best possible shape.
I can volunteer to review both documents. Richard also volunteered, thank
you Richard. We would like to suggest targeting two more volunteers. Could
any of you help support this work?

 

We are targeting 22/05 to complete this new round of revisions, as that's
the target day for the 2nd WGLC.

 

These are the docs:

 

- New Transport:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-new-transport/

- OAM: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang/

 

Please feel free to forward this email if you know others (inside or ouside
ALTO) who can help review the docs too.

 

As we are working to wrap up the current charter, this is very important
work to ensure the quality of the documents produced by ALTO. Thank you for
your collaboration.

 

Jordi, on behalf of ALTO

[alto] Call for volunteers to review 2nd WGLC for… Jordi Ros Giralt
[alto] draft-ietf-alto-new-transport : Call for v… Adrian Farrel
[alto] draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang : Call for volunt… Adrian Farrel
Re: [alto] draft-ietf-alto-new-transport : Call f… kaigao
Re: [alto] draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang : Call for vo… Jensen Zhang
Re: [alto] draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang : Call for vo… mohamed.boucadair