Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09.txt

Danny Alex Lachos Perez <dlachosper@gmail.com> Tue, 17 September 2019 18:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09.txt
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Dear authors,

I started to read the “Unified Properties for the ALTO Protocol” draft
(-09).

Please, see my first comments in the attached file (search for '[DANNY]').
Many of them are suggestions about clarity and format issues .

I will continue the review and send additional comments in a short time.

Best regards,

Danny Lachos


On Wed, Sep 4, 2019 at 10:41 AM <internet-drafts@ietf.org>; wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG
> of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Unified Properties for the ALTO Protocol
>         Authors         : Wendy Roome
>                           Sabine Randriamasy
>                           Y. Richard Yang
>                           Jingxuan Jensen Zhang
>                           Kai Gao
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09.txt
>         Pages           : 43
>         Date            : 2019-09-04
>
> Abstract:
>    This document extends the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization
>    (ALTO) Protocol [RFC7285] by generalizing the concept of "endpoint
>    properties" to generic types of entities, and by presenting those
>    properties as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in
>    [RFC7285].
>
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09
>
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