Re: [altoext] FW: New Version Notification for draft-lee-alto-app-net-info-exchange-00.txt

[Sabine Randriamasy <[e-mail]>]

Hi Young,

I have read your draft and have a couple of comments and questions.

In Section 2 Problem statement, I agree with the need to reduce the 
amount of conveyed ALTO information through topology filtering and 
constraint-based response filtering. The ALTO base protocol specifies 
these features for the Cost Map, Filtered cost map and Endpoint cost 
services. I also agree with the necessity to provide several types of 
cost information which stresses the necessity of extended filtering 
mechanisms. In the Constraints filtering extensions of Section 3, I 
didnt' really get how information confidentiality is preserved and the 
proposed specification raised the questions detailed below.

I also agree that detailing end to end path costs at the link level at 
some places can be beneficial, especially for local bottlenecks 
sometimes with fast changing cost values. Figure 2 shows an example with 
Link capacity costs but section 2 uses them rather as capacity, where I 
figure the higher the better. Without a hint on how path costs are 
calculated it is hard to follow the rationale on the DC choice by ER1. 
See also the questions detailed below.

Thanks,
Sabine

------------------------- Detailed questions -----------------------------

++ Section 3.1 ALTO Query from Application Stratum to Network Stratum
Names used in the list of requested information may be misleading:
- A 'Cost Type' see base protocol (§5.1.1) is expected to indicate an 
attribute that has a value such as number, boolean, string... and is is 
rather "semantic". 'summary' and 'graph' are cost attributes of 
different nature.
- 'Constraints' such as 'min/max metric' look like objectives rather 
than expressions such as 'lt. value' as specified in the base protocol 
(§ 6.8.2.2.3)
- what kind of information is member 'Parameters' is supposed to carry 
and for what use?
- Some members listed here do not appear in the ALTO Query Information 
Model of §3.3: 'parameters' 'objective-function'. Neither do they appear 
in the example of §3.5


++ Section 3.2 ALTO response from Network ....
- The list of S-D pairs should carry the Cost Type *values* as the 
supported Cost Types are expected to be listed and checked in the IRD.
- 'Constraint values': need to be clarified: is it the actual cost 
value? then the draft should specifiy that the constraits relate to Cost 
Types (as defined in §5.1.1).
- how is the 'Administration Domain ID' of a S-D pair reported and why 
is it needed?  


++ Section 3.3 Information Model of ALTO Query ...
Looking at the specification here, it is hard to figure out what is 
really extended here w.r.t. the Endpoint Cost Service query input 
specified in the base protocol.
- A new media type "CsoReqEndpointCostMap" and differs from 
"ReqEndpointCostMap" of the base protocol in that the set in member 
'contraints' is encoded/interpreted differently, according to example in 
§3.5. Then a different member name than 'contraints' should be used.
- As for member 'endpoints': unless you need to specify only 1 src EP, 
what is the need to define a new object "EndpointFilterExt" instead of 
keeping the "EndpointFilter"?


++ Section 3.4 Information Model of ALTO Response ...
- object CsoInfoResourceEndpointCostMap has the same structure than 
InfoResourceEndpointCostMap of base protocol
- what in the list of §3.2 does object 'DstCostsConstraints' refer to?
- this object seem to be encoded like a set of JSONNumbers that are the 
values of resp. hopcount, latency and packet loss. So I guess, they 
should be arranged in an array.
- why is this set of cost types already set at this level of 
specification? 


++ Section 3.5 ALTO protocol extension...
I agree with the idea of providing several Cost Type values at a time 
but the encoding could be lighter. The draft "Multi-Cost ALTO" proposes 
one example.
There is a real need that this section be harmonized with the previous 
specification sections, as the encoding provided in the examples are 
misleading.


++ Section 4.1 Representing....
- this section is rather about representing links and their attributes, 
so could be named accordingly
- the graph specification is curretnly a list of links, do you intend to 
extend so that one can infer its structure?  
- is there a reason preventing member 'r-cap' to be specified as 
JSONNumber capacity?
- what is the usage of wt at this level of a spec ? (could also be 
'JSONNumber weight')

Leeyoung a écrit :
> Hi All,
>
> We have just published ALTO extension to support application and network resource information exchange for high bandwidth applications.
> This is part of the i2aex initiative. 
>
> Thanks in advance for your comment and discussion. 
>
> Young
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> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-lee-alto-app-net-info-exchange-00.txt
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> A new version of I-D, draft-lee-alto-app-net-info-exchange-00.txt
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> Filename:	 draft-lee-alto-app-net-info-exchange
> Revision:	 00
> Title:		 ALTO Extensions to Support Application and Network Resource Information Exchange for High Bandwidth Applications
> Creation date:	 2012-07-09
> WG ID:		 Individual Submission
> Number of pages: 14
> URL:             http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-lee-alto-app-net-info-exchange-00.txt
> Status:          http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-lee-alto-app-net-info-exchange
> Htmlized:        http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-lee-alto-app-net-info-exchange-00
>
>
> Abstract:
> This draft proposes ALTO information model and protocol extensions to
> support application and network resource information exchange for high
> bandwidth applications in partially controlled and controlled
> environments as part of the infrastructure to application information
> exposure (i2aex) initiative.
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