[Anima-bootstrap] keyinfra-06-pre

peter van der Stok <stokcons@xs4all.nl> Thu, 18 May 2017 08:06 UTC

Return-Path: <stokcons@xs4all.nl>
X-Original-To: anima-bootstrap@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: anima-bootstrap@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 09D63129BCF for <anima-bootstrap@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 18 May 2017 01:06:54 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: 0.08
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=0.08 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_50=0.8, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H3=-0.01, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL=-0.01, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id q34CLZV7J0qz for <anima-bootstrap@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 18 May 2017 01:06:52 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from lb2-smtp-cloud3.xs4all.net (lb2-smtp-cloud3.xs4all.net [194.109.24.26]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES128-SHA (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 791D612EC20 for <anima-bootstrap@ietf.org>; Thu, 18 May 2017 01:00:34 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from webmail.xs4all.nl ([IPv6:2001:888:0:22:194:109:20:214]) by smtp-cloud3.xs4all.net with ESMTP id Mk0Y1v00L0F6qFb01k0YAu; Thu, 18 May 2017 10:00:32 +0200
Received: from AMontpellier-654-1-32-9.w90-0.abo.wanadoo.fr ([90.0.167.9]) by webmail.xs4all.nl with HTTP (HTTP/1.1 POST); Thu, 18 May 2017 10:00:32 +0200
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 10:00:32 +0200
From: peter van der Stok <stokcons@xs4all.nl>
To: Anima-bootstrap <anima-bootstrap@ietf.org>
Organization: vanderstok consultancy
Reply-To: consultancy@vanderstok.org
Mail-Reply-To: consultancy@vanderstok.org
Message-ID: <71061b3c11b19a8c6ac7d7f7e842c235@xs4all.nl>
X-Sender: stokcons@xs4all.nl
User-Agent: XS4ALL Webmail
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/anima-bootstrap/znFP4um9aHlCHCUMFziHsgt4wQY>
Subject: [Anima-bootstrap] keyinfra-06-pre
X-BeenThere: anima-bootstrap@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22
Precedence: list
List-Id: Mailing list for the bootstrap design team of the ANIMA WG <anima-bootstrap.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/anima-bootstrap>, <mailto:anima-bootstrap-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/anima-bootstrap/>
List-Post: <mailto:anima-bootstrap@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:anima-bootstrap-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima-bootstrap>, <mailto:anima-bootstrap-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 08:06:54 -0000

Hi all,

After reading through the latest keyinfra version, I like to make some 
remarks about section 3.8 to keep the est-coaps text straightforward.

In the 2nd paragraph, the text "(enrollment picks up .... Key 
generation")" is difficult to place.
Does it refer to figure 2 of the appendix?
section 3.8.4 suggests that /enrollstatus is an extension of EST. I hope 
not. Could the /enrollstatus part of 3.8.4 be moved to a separate 
subsection e.g. 3.9? Once that part is moved, section 3.8 is focused on 
invoking EST functions and how to handle the payloads.
section 3.8.5 could just cite est-coaps document as informational 
reference.

The next version of est-coaps will refer to sections of the keyinfra 
document, and feedback about the alignment of the keyinfra and est-coaps 
documents would be appreciated.

Greetings,
Peter



-- 
Peter van der Stok
vanderstok consultancy
mailto: consultancy@vanderstok.org
www: www.vanderstok.org
tel NL: +31(0)492474673     F: +33(0)966015248