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Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Sun, 19 December 2021 22:32 UTC

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Subject: [Anima] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-asa-guidelines-05.txt
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Hi,

This version is intended to cover the technical and editorial clarifications raised in the three Last Call reviews that we received.

The main changes:
* Clarified NETCONF wording.
* Removed <CODE BEGINS> on advice from IETF Trust
* Noted resource limits in constrained nodes
* Strengthened text on data integrity in resource management example
* Strengthen discussion of extensibility of GRASP objectives
and quite a number of editorial improvements.

Regards
    Brian + co-authors

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Subject: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-asa-guidelines-05.txt
Date: Sun, 19 Dec 2021 14:20:23 -0800
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and Approach WG of the IETF.

         Title           : Guidelines for Autonomic Service Agents
         Authors         : Brian Carpenter
                           Laurent Ciavaglia
                           Sheng Jiang
                           Pierre Peloso
	Filename        : draft-ietf-anima-asa-guidelines-05.txt
	Pages           : 29
	Date            : 2021-12-19

Abstract:
    This document proposes guidelines for the design of Autonomic Service
    Agents for autonomic networks.  Autonomic Service Agents, together
    with the Autonomic Network Infrastructure, the Autonomic Control
    Plane and the Generic Autonomic Signaling Protocol constitute base
    elements of a so-called autonomic networking ecosystem.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-asa-guidelines/

There is also an HTML version available at:
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-anima-asa-guidelines-05.html

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-anima-asa-guidelines-05


Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts


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