Re: [Anima] BRSKI#43, Figure 5 YANG Tree diagram for Voucher-Request

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Subject: Re: [Anima] BRSKI#43, Figure 5 YANG Tree diagram for Voucher-Request
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Thanks, just one small change, the refinement of "voucher/pinned-domain-cert" should read: 

      refine "voucher/pinned-domain-cert" {
        mandatory false;
        description "A pinned-domain-cert field
                     is not valid in a voucher request, and
                     any occurrence MUST be ignored";
      }

Best regards
Thomas

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Von: Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> 
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Cc: Werner, Thomas (CT RDA CST SEA-DE) <thomas-werner@siemens.com>
Betreff: Re: BRSKI#43, Figure 5 YANG Tree diagram for Voucher-Request


Thomas has pointed out that the "pinned-domain-cert" and "last-renewal-date"
fields which are defined in RFC8366 are not clearly specified for the voucher-request.

Neither are needed or appropriate in a voucher-request.
I have edited the YANG to include:

      refine "voucher/pinned-domain-cert" {
        mandatory false;
        description "A voucher-request field
                     is not valid in a voucher request, and
                     any occurrence MUST be ignored";
      }

      refine "voucher/last-renewal-date" {
        description "A last-renewal-date field
                     is not valid in a voucher request, and
                     any occurrence MUST be ignored";
      }

This is, I think, an editorial change.

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Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca>, Sandelman Software Works  -= IPv6 IoT consulting =-