Re: [Anima] Adoption call for draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution (ends 01/27/2020)

Xun Xiao <Xun.Xiao@huawei.com> Wed, 19 February 2020 17:01 UTC

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From: Xun Xiao <Xun.Xiao@huawei.com>
To: "Liubing (Leo)" <leo.liubing@huawei.com>, Toerless Eckert <tte@cs.fau.de>, "anima@ietf.org" <anima@ietf.org>
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Dear Toerless,

Just followed Bing's reply, we were currently editing to first record all provided comments. We will update a new version for that soon. 

After that we will start to address all technical issues one by one and keep improving the draft.

Best Regards,

Xun Xiao (肖迅)
Advanced Wireless Technology Lab
Munich Research Center
Huawei Technologies Co.,Ltd.

-----Original Message-----
From: Anima [mailto:anima-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Liubing (Leo)
Sent: Thursday, 13 February 2020 07:20
To: Toerless Eckert <tte@cs.fau.de>de>; anima@ietf.org
Cc: draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Anima] Adoption call for draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution (ends 01/27/2020)

Hi Toerless,

Thanks a lot for summarizing the comments!
We'll revise a new version as you suggested, and upload it soon. We'll also try to maintain a github repo.

Best regards,
Bing

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Toerless Eckert [mailto:tte@cs.fau.de]
> Sent: Tuesday, February 11, 2020 7:13 AM
> To: anima@ietf.org
> Cc: draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Anima] Adoption call for 
> draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution (ends
> 01/27/2020)
> 
> We had 5 voices feedback (from non-authors) to support adoption of 
> this document, and no voices objecting. I think this qualifies for 
> adoption of the document.
> 
> Nevertheless, the supporting voices did indicate a range of 
> improvements they would like to see. So, jere is what i would propose:
> 
> Dear-authors:
> 
> A) Please add a section Open Issues, mark it as
> [RFC-Editor: To Be removed before becoming RFC].
> Make it contain the following text:
> 
> The following issues where identified by the WG when adopting the -00 
> draft version. These issues will be individually removed in upcoming 
> when they are resolved.
> 
> 1. More reference to the use cases in the introduction.
> 
> 2. Better explanation of the required context of the Connected-Car case:
> Not applicable unless the ACP will be extended to the car, which may 
> not be desirable with the current ACP design, but maybe refocussing on 
> an "autonomous fleet" use-case (e.g.: all cars operated by some taxi like service).
> 
> 3. Consider use-case/example of firmware update.  By abstracting the 
> location of the firmware from the name of the firmware, while 
> providing a way to notify about it, this significantly supports distribution of firmware updates.
> References to SUIT would appropriate.
> 
> 4. Issues discussed in
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/anima/_0fYQPBcLPt8xzQee7P4dILsn3
> A
> 
> 5. Rethink/refine terminology, e.g.: "module" seems to be too prescriptive.
> Refine proposed extensions.
> 
> 6. I support adoption, but also support the suggestion (from IETF106) 
> Provide more protocol behavior description  instead of only 
> implementation / software module architecture description.
> Reduce the latter or provide better justification for their presence 
> due to explained interoperability requirements.
> 
> 7. Better motivation in sections 1..4 of the proposed extensions
> 
> 8. Consider moving examples from appendices into core-text . Ideally 
> craft a single use-case showing/applying all extensions (most simple 
> use case that uses them all).
> 
> 9. Refine terminology to better match/reuse-the established 
> terminology from the pre-existing ANIMA documents.
> 
> B) Add changelog section, equally marked as to be removed before . For 
> this version -00 it should just list above section from A) to be new.
> 
> C) Designate in the authors list one or two main editors for the time
>    being, doesn't have to be final, just whoever has the main edit pen
>    from you.  Post this version as -00 with name
>    draft-ietf-anima-grasp-distribution-00
>    and replacing draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution
> 
>    I will then approve that doc as WG chair.
> 
> D) Feel free to work on -01 and further. In the changelog, please
>    describe for each change which of the above 9 points are addressed by
>    the change and concentrate on those changes first before addressing
>    further enhancements.
> 
> E) I would strongly suggest you authors consider to create a repo for
>    this document under www.github.com/anima-wg It specifically makees
>    it easier to open for each of the above 10 bullet points possible
>    "Issues" where it would be easier to have focussed discusses.
> 
>    I am not a github is the only way groupie though, so please make sure
>    all discussions are Cc'ed to the mailing list, even though it may primarily be on
>    github to make then easier to track/find.
> 
> Cheers
>     Toerless
> 
> On Mon, Jan 13, 2020 at 12:45:33PM +0100, Toerless Eckert wrote:
> > This message starts a two-week adoption call, it ends on January 27th, 2020.
> >
> > draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution was progressed up to version -13 
> > with the help of the WG, it was last presented at IETF106 with good interest.
> > The draft is now clearly in scope of ANIMA charter 2 that was 
> > adopted around IETF106. The authors asked for adoption of the document.
> > As far as the chairs heard, there was no objection in the room.
> >
> > We therefore are asking the ANIMA working group for adoption of the
> following work:
> >
> > Title:    Information Distribution in Autonomic Networking
> > Name:     draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution
> > Authors:  B. Liu, X. Xiao, A. Hecker, S. Jiang, Z. Despotovic
> > URL:      https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution/
> >
> > This document is intended to become a standards track ANIMA WG document.
> >
> > Standard track is desired because it is meant to become the required 
> > small set of protocol extensions to the GRASP protocol in support of 
> > the self-organization of ASA.
> >
> > Please express your support or rejection. If you think this document 
> > should _not_ be adopted, please also explicitly indicate the reasons.
> >
> > For the ANIMA WG chairs,
> >     Toerless
> >
> > _______________________________________________
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> > Anima@ietf.org
> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
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