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From: "Ciavaglia, Laurent (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay)" <laurent.ciavaglia@nokia.com>
To: Sheng Jiang <jiangsheng@huawei.com>, Anima WG <anima@ietf.org>, "Brian E Carpenter (brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com)" <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Anima] WGLC on draft-ietf-anima-grasp-api-05 - Respond by May 25th, 2020
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Hello,

I have read the latest version. My comments can be found in the attached document.

Overall, I think the content of the document is fine and ok to proceed.
However, I have some suggestions for re-structuring some sections and adding a few things to improve readability and the overall flow.
Depending on the authors choice, this may require a new version of the I-D (but I will not fight for it).

I have not reviewed the annex in detail.

Best regards, Laurent.

From: Anima <anima-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Sheng Jiang
Sent: Monday, May 11, 2020 05:16
To: Anima WG <anima@ietf.org>
Cc: anima-chairs@ietf.org; Toerless Eckert <tte@cs.fau.de>
Subject: [Anima] WGLC on draft-ietf-anima-grasp-api-05 - Respond by May 25th, 2020

Hi all,

This message starts the two-week ANIMA Working Group Last Call to advance draft-ietf-anima-grasp-api-05, Generic Autonomic Signaling Protocol Application Program Interface (GRASP API). This document's intended status is Informational. At present, there is no IPR file against this document. This document has been ANIMA WG document since Dec, 2017 and have received a few good review. The authors have addressed all known comments and think the document is ready for WGLC.

Please send your comments by May 25th, 2020. If you do not feel this document should advance, please state your reasons why.

Sheng JIANG is the assigned document shepherd.

Regards,

Sheng

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