Re: [Anima] draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra

Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com> Tue, 14 April 2020 11:22 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Anima] draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra
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Hi,

IMHO:

> On 14 Apr 2020, at 12:03, tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com> wrote:
> 
> The IESG approval of this I-D caused me to look again at it:-(
> 
> I note that part of the formal specification is in CDDL and while other DDL - ASN.1, SMI, YANG - are bracketed with CODE BEGINS CODE ENDS - the CDDL  is not. I suspect that it should be - perhaps a note to the RFC Editor is called for.

Yes.

> 
> In the Security Considerations I encounter MTIM which I suspect should be MITM (and which needs expanding on first use in s.5).
> 

Editorial.

> In the YANG module, I see two references in square brackets which suggests that they are in XML/HTML and not plain text whereas there is a requirement for YANG modules to be in plain text so that they can be extracted from the RFC.

Editorial.

Thanks for looking!

Eliot