Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-28: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Fri, 03 January 2020 18:34 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-28: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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I have pushed -33 with changes as below. tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com> wrote: > On 31/12/2019 22:01, Michael Richardson wrote: >> >> tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com> wrote: >> > Security Considerations, the YANG Guidelines RFC says that you must mention >> > TLS, HTTPS, etc and give pro forma text for doing so. As long as you still >> > have a YANG module, as you do in s.3.4, I would expect those guidelines to >> > apply and so to see something like the pro forma text >> >> Please see: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8366.html#section-7.4 >> >> TLS is already specified and discussed at length in the document. >> If you want me to copy the second paragraph from there in, I can do that, but >> it seems like needless text. You can't implement BRSKI without reading >> RFC8366. > Looking at -32: > Security; OK, leave it be. > IANA yes, that is (almost) what I wanted - I suggest that the title of 8.2 > should be 'YANG Module Names Registry. fixed, sorry, stupid copy and paste error. > References still trouble me. > The YANG module has > reference "RFC xxxx Voucher Profile for Bootstrapping Protocols" > I cannot find an I-D of that name - it is not the name of this I-D; do you > mean "Bootstrapping Remote Secure Key Infrastructure" which is the current > title of this I-D and which I would I think would not appear to be the same > reference to a layman? I have fixed it to say: reference "RFC XXXX: Bootstrapping Remote Secure Key Infrastructure"; But, as this is actually the voucher-request, should it instead say something about that? I also saw: reference "RFC 8366: Voucher Profile for Bootstrapping Protocols"; I have fixed it to: reference "RFC 8366: Voucher Artifact for Bootstrapping Protocols"; > Also on References, in -31 you had X.690 as a Normative Reference which I > thought spot on - now you have removed the reference which I think wrong. > YANG 'leaf proximity-registrar-cert' mentions X.690 so I think that > a) you need a YANG reference clause for the leaf Dang. I removed that because I couldn't find a reference to it, because in the YANG, the reference is not in the normal fashion. I've restored the reference and fixed the YANG description > b) you need a XML/HTML reference in the body of the I-D so as to avoid an > unused ref error - 'The YANG module makes reference to [X.690] ' {or > [ITU.X690.1994] } is the way most authors address this I've put a reference into an appendix that the RFC editor should remove, which is what I started doing earlier this week, then discovered the section appeared empty. -- Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca>, Sandelman Software Works -= IPv6 IoT consulting =-
- [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf-ani… Alissa Cooper via Datatracker
- Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf… Michael Richardson
- Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf… Michael Richardson
- Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf… Alissa Cooper
- Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf… Michael Richardson
- Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf… Alissa Cooper
- Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf… tom petch
- Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf… Michael Richardson
- Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf… tom petch
- Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf… Michael Richardson
- Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf… tom petch
- Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf… Michael Richardson
- Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf… tom petch
- Re: [Anima] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf… Michael Richardson
- [Anima] draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra tom petch
- Re: [Anima] draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinf… Eliot Lear