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Re: [Anima] [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-08

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 25 October 2018 12:02 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Thu, 25 Oct 2018 14:02:01 +0200
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Subject: Re: [Anima] [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-08
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Brian,

> On Oct 12, 2018, at 7:22 AM, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Joel,
> 
> On 2018-10-12 15:17, Joel Halpern wrote:
> ....
> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>>    The reference [IDevID] still appears to me to be a normative reference.
> 
> It is normative in draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra, where it really 
> matters. Seems like a marginal point in an Informational document, but of course
> we'll follow the IESG's guidance.

Since draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra is a normative reference in this document, IDevID seems like it should be as well. That is, it seems to be used in a normative way in the same manner as the other normative references in this document. If the document were not going to have any normative references, then I think IDevID could be informative.

Joel, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> 
>>   In 3.3.3, the new parenthetical e.g. (replacing the wording "For example",
>>   seems to have no closing parenthesis.
> 
> Ack.
> 
> Thanks
>     Brian
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