Re: [Anima] Adoption call for draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution (ends 01/27/2020)

<mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Wed, 22 January 2020 15:40 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Anima] Adoption call for draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution (ends 01/27/2020)
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Hi all,

I support the draft. 

Some serious work is required for the following sections to better motivate the required extensions:

   1  Introduction  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  3
   2. Terminology . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  3
   3. Requirements of Enriched Information Distribution . . . . . . .  4
   4. Node Behaviors  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  5
     4.1 Instant Information Distribution (IID) Sub-module  . . . . .  5
     4.2 Asynchronous Information Distribution (AID) Sub-module . . .  6
     4.3 Summary  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10

I would also move some use cases in the appendix into the core text. It would be even interesting if some of the extensions/usage are illustrated with one use case. 

There is some disconnect in the terms used in the document vs. the ANIMA reference architecture (e.g. the use of autonomic function). Double checking that would be cool. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Anima [mailto:anima-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de Toerless
> Eckert
> Envoyé : lundi 13 janvier 2020 12:46
> À : anima@ietf.org
> Cc : draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution@ietf.org
> Objet : [Anima] Adoption call for draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution
> (ends 01/27/2020)
> 
> This message starts a two-week adoption call, it ends on January 27th,
> 2020.
> 
> draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution was progressed up to version -13
> with
> the help of the WG, it was last presented at IETF106 with good
> interest.
> The draft is now clearly in scope of ANIMA charter 2 that was adopted
> around IETF106. The authors asked for adoption of the document.
> As far as the chairs heard, there was no objection in the room.
> 
> We therefore are asking the ANIMA working group for adoption of the
> following work:
> 
> Title:    Information Distribution in Autonomic Networking
> Name:     draft-liu-anima-grasp-distribution
> Authors:  B. Liu, X. Xiao, A. Hecker, S. Jiang, Z. Despotovic
> URL:      https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-liu-anima-grasp-
> distribution/
> 
> This document is intended to become a standards track ANIMA WG
> document.
> 
> Standard track is desired because it is meant to become the required
> small set of protocol extensions to the GRASP protocol in support of
> the self-organization of ASA.
> 
> Please express your support or rejection. If you think this document
> should _not_ be adopted, please also explicitly indicate the reasons.
> 
> For the ANIMA WG chairs,
>     Toerless
> 
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